The "Tower of Babel" in your conlang

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Re: The "Tower of Babel" in your conlang

Postby choc_pud » Fri 24 Jan 2014 8:21 pm

Oh, I would say it is still active, though you're right in that not many people seem to be using it nowadays!

I'm guessing that Czuimese is a Romance Conlang? The massive SENIOR staring one in the face is a dead giveaway! :D It looks great; how far with it have you got?

The only conlang of mine which I've translated the Babel Passage into is 'Fenlian' (or 'Fenx'), a Celtic language spoken on the eastern British island of Fenley. It looks like this:

Tgenghesiss 11. 1-9:

1 Ornth nga cghameghas 'efghebh tgang dann ricc bhrorchlh, ornth dann bhigharach.
2 Ornth cumann bha careyghar, afash thing bha co cghbhay nga dh-icghshe; thing bha ess dann dofotg eeng'a rill fern Ciania, onrth 'arrash bha common thing.
3 Onrth 'ing bha ngabh eeng atgeghass “Co, dh-ornth uurh hacca brichabha uchige, ornth 'eghen phrorghrorbghech uchige”. Ornth 'ing bha bhrorchlh carregg brichabha, ornth guuregg thing bha bhrorchlh ngach morttach.
4 Ornth 'ing bha ngabh “Co, dh-ornth uurh fhacca dann carriph uchige, ornth dann cghofecghsh, ornth nga fite fhacca estabbach eeng 'a Cencghsheghasrill. Ornth uurh fhacca dann fern uchige, tharunge efe uurh tgef bha dh-uce abufe nga cghameghas 'efghebh.
5 Ornth Cencghsheghas bha lheme iln nga bha dh-ess nga carriph ornth nga carregg essar nga fheollanbha rhra elrhabha bha uchige.
6 Ornth Cencghsheghas bha ngabh “Biolng, nga bheyghillog tgef dann, ornth 'ing bhrorchlh belelh dann bhigharach, ornth dharrhfé thing thabh careyghar. Ornth deghamuun cumunnlogh aguss fran tgef yengha tharunge theghen, essar thing aguss phacara careyghar.
7 Co, dh-uurh fhacca dh-iln tharrash co, ornth tharrash uurh fhacca thingang bhigharach yengha uchige, soe thing can logh aguss daeghabh atgeghass ngabh”.
8 Soe Cencghsheghas bha dh-uce theghen cghbhay tharrash abufe nga cghameghas 'efghebh, ornth 'ing bha thabh nga carriph logh uchige.
9 Ornth soe nga fern rhra pogeghaghce tgef Babéghl, enghethe tharrash Cencghsheghas bha tume nga bhigharachbha rhra nga cghameghas 'efghebh, ornth cghbhay tharrash Cencghsheghas bha dh-uce abufe nga cghameghas 'efghebh.

I wouldn't claim it as being perfect or even that good; I invented the language some years ago and have not done anything with it recently at all.

How come you spell Czuimese with brackets around the z?
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Re: The "Tower of Babel" in your conlang

Postby xadrezo » Fri 24 Jan 2014 8:47 pm

Yes, Czuimese is indeed a romlang; it's a language I made about five years ago when I tried to comprehend how portuguese works.

The result was a language with a phonology copied from Portuguese (I modified it a bit), broken latin grammar (mainly the cases which I forgot to mark on some words like lia tore which should be lia torem) and a mix of deformed portuguese maltese and a priori vocabulary. I reformed it approximately a million times or so to make it more "natural" and "romance". Nonetheless I'm proud of it.
I have a spreadsheet where all the words and the grammar is stored, it says there are 1150 words, which is misleading because the irregular past participles have a seperate entry as well. (by the way, every verb has a irregular past participle, there are regular variants, but I don't use them so often). I tried to make poetry in Czuimese but I'm a terrible poet. But I try.


quote: "How come you spell Czuimese with brackets around the z?"
It's due to inconsistent transliteration/replacement for ç. It's either c, zz or cz. I like cz the most.

What I like about Fenlian is the consonant clusters which (I guess) are mostly silent, like onrth or bhrorchlh. It reminds me of Scottish, but I'm not a expert.

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Re: The "Tower of Babel" in your conlang

Postby Täzari » Fri 09 May 2014 7:29 pm

Rhamos Vhailejh wrote:Old Dwojin:
Modern Duojjin:
1. Takjåöra djjiien jjinn'ivjeistaessaeksiejj qjeirraeššö'virhön.
2. Niin miöta kyrrhessanna Jiistaluo metkåaejj, Šiinarmaaval pelnejj ii'lyötönen niin siita sethåanen.
3. Niin tyysyvöl ii'jjinnen: "Tullahin. Pulitiessa seiessa'kreiåahinde, niin jassö deiessa'palohin." Niin keivihöl pulitiessaejj hänessa'virhönnen, niin hymaröhöl tervataejj ii'virhönnen.
4. Tuoöra hänessa'jjinnen: "Tullahin. Kohii'idjjjøraejj, deina djjåöšan'eiönvalmos, niin seiessahöl keiššaejj seiessa'kreiåahinde, junavan qjeirraeššöna vaipiessöljeira seiessa'råjattajatmei."
5. Niin tjaere Valtan'tullanen jetta kohii'idjjjøran svenihin, kohin mika onkuluen imiškyrrhe'kreiåanen.
6. Niin Valtan'jjinnen: "Svenihin. Hänessa'djjiijimiškyrrhessamei, niin jjineksin ii'virhin, niin mikaen ii'jar jatta'miöalkimei. Niin takjåöra hänessahöl mieliskiejj'kunnötyr.
7. Tullahin. Tjaere åjaahinde, niin hännaessa jjinejj siita keiosjatihin ja tyysyna jjinejj ii'maštajåa."
8. Ninteia siitalle qjeirraeššöna vaipiessöljeira hänessaejj Valtan'råjattanen.
9. Ninteia deina keiššan'Beibölhjeiŋ. Koskeien qjeirraeššöna jjinessöejj siita Valtan'keiosjatnen. Niin siitaluo qjeirraeššöna vaipiessöljeira hänessaejj Valtan'råjattanen.

I would really like to know more about your Modern Duojjin.... Could you put some glosses or give a simple explanation about the structure of the language? I'm actually intrigued by the long words...
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Re: The "Tower of Babel" in your conlang

Postby Kartovskiy » Sat 01 Nov 2014 6:59 pm


4 Et elhos digata, A vaya , permita ne construgar une cite et une tore, de qui aupe pove auganzar en a Cielo; et permita ne fabricar una noma, fara que no nos fiar disperzata alestro en le compleccion de une mon.

5 Et le Patrie venita jeu vistar le cite et le tore, que le fihos de mane construgata.

6 Et le Patrie digata, Vistaya!, le persons fia uno, et elhos ave tute una lengua; et iste comenza hacer: Et tora nada fiare restranhata d'elhos, que elhos ave imaxinata hacer.

7 A vaya, permita ne var jeu, et acolha confunde lhore lengua, que elhos no permita comprender a l'otros quando elhos voca.

8 Asi le Patrie disperzata les alestro trase le compleccion de tute mon: et elhos vata construgar le cite.

9 Que acolha fia la noma de'le nomata Babel; porque le Patrie haceta acolha - confundeta la lengua de tute le mon: et de acolha haceta le Patrie disperzar les alestro en le compleccion de tute le mon.

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Re: The "Tower of Babel" in your conlang

Postby Theodiskaz » Thu 26 Feb 2015 7:32 pm

This is my reconstruction of VUlgar Latin. When I speak it with my family, we refer to it as "Lingua Romana", but since there is already one of those here, a good looking one, I would say, I will refer to mine as "Lingua Romana Rustica". I have produced it in two registers, archaic (poetic, formal) and colloquial.

The Tower of Babel
(Genesis 11: 1-9)

Lingua Romana Rustica (Archaic)

1. Hac hora, tota terra fabulabat una sola lingua et usabat metipsas parábolas.
2. Dum ínterim hómines de oriente migrabant, invenirunt unu planu in terra de Babylone et ibi se stabilirunt.
3. Ei cominitiarunt unus ad altru dícere, “Venite, quod faciamus lateres et eos duremus cum igne. Et ei usabant lateres pro petras et bitúmine pro cementa.
4. Illa hora dixerunt, “Venite, quod nos edificemus nobis una civitate et una turre cuius àpice attingit celos. Nos nobis fàcere habemus unu bonu nómine, ne nos stemus super tota terra dispersi.”
5. Magis Dóminus descendit, civitate et turre quod edificabant hómines pro videre.
6. Et Dóminus dixit, “Ecce, pópulus est iunctus, et omnis metipsa lingua fábulant. De ex post hoc, ei posse habetis áliquod quod volent fácere!”
7. Venite, quod descendamus et confundamus eora lingua, quod unus non altru intélligat.
8. Sic Dóminus eos dispersit de ex inde super tota terra, et ei cessarunt civitate edificare.
9. Hoc est quare ille locus est nominátus Babel, pro quod ibi est ubi Dóminus confundáut pópulu cum diversa lingua. In hic modo Dóminus eos dispersit super tota terra.

The Tower of Babel
(Genesis 11: 1-9)

Lingua Romana Rustica (colloquial)

1. Acora, tota illa terra fablabat una sola lingua et usabat illas metissimas parablas.
2. Dumintre illi omnes migrabant de illo oriente, issi troparunt unu planu in illa terra de Babylone et ibi se stablirunt.
3. Issi comintiarunt unus ad altru dícere, “Venite, quid faciamus lateres et los duremus cum foco . Et issi usabant lateres por petras et bitúmine por cementa.
4. Illora disserunt, “Venite, quid nos edificemus nois una ciutate et una turre cuius àpice attingit illos celos. Nos nois facerabemus unu bonu nomne, ne nos stemus dispersi supre tota illa terra.”
5. Mais Domnus descendit por videre issa ciutate et issa turre quid edificabant omnes.
6. Et Domnus dissit , “Ecce, ille poplus est juntus, et onnis fablant illa metissima lingua. Dexpost eccuiste, issi potrabetis facere alquid quid volent!”
7. Venite, quid descendamus et confundamus issora lingua, quid unus non altru comprendat.
8. Sic Domius sos dispersit dessinde supre tota illa terrra, et issi cessarunt edificare issa ciutate.
9. Hoc est quare eccuille locus est nominatus Babel, por quid ibi est ubi Domnus confundáut issu poplu cum diversa lingua. In eccuisto modo Domnus sos dispersit supre tota illa terra.

NOTE The accent indicates syllable stress, not necessarily vowel length.

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Re: The "Tower of Babel" in your conlang

Postby lobotomicco » Mon 28 Sep 2015 7:50 am

1 - Er ænt erva ekkst öx edd lenke och festest er egl hljäfinne.

/əɾ ænt 'ɛɾðɑ ɛʰkst oʊ̯:ks ɛd 'lɛŋkə ox 'fɛstəst əɾ ɛgl 'xlʲaɪ̯:vɪnə/

2 - Vig er migghette hïs er elstare, er fettinn enktst la pjánse ag er ervak Senaara, och vach hjú stvelst ef.

/vɪɣ əɾ 'mɪghəʰtə hɛɪ̯:s əɾ 'ɛ:lstɑɾə, əɾ 'fɛʰtɪn 'ɛ:ŋkt͡st lɑ 'pʲa:nsə ɑɣ əɾ 'ɛɾðɑk 'sɛ:nɑ:ɾɑ, ox vɑx çu 'stfɛ:lstəv/

3 - Hjú dícest aldrýnns: "Vinä-gorr fássek tjallinne och kœslek hjúk nach er føg". Hjú festest tjallinne hvomm fertinn och betume hvomm simgnoff.

/çu 'di:t͡səst 'ɑldɾeɪ̯ns 'vɪ:naɪ̯goɾ̥ 'fasək 'tʲɑlɪnə ox 'kœsl̥ək çuk nɑx əɾ fø:ɣ çu 'fɛstəst 'tʲɑlɪnə xvom 'fɛɾtɪn ox 'bɛtʏ:mə xvom 'sɪ:mgnof/

4 - Och hjú dícest: "Vinä-gorr ganstek af gok la skjome och la boge ve sjeg tjæ er himme. Fitta gorr fássur klache. Kjäntseg gorr enur dîp ob er ænt ervasperfe"

/ox çu 'di:t͡səst 'vɪ:naɪ̯goɾ̥ 'gɑ:nstək ɑv gok lɑ 'sco:mə ox lɑ 'bo:ɣə və ɕɛɣ tʲæ əɾ 'hɪmə fɪʰtɑ goɾ̥ 'fasʏɾ 'klɑxə 'caɪ̯ntsəɣ goɾ̥ 'ɛ:nʏɾ dĩᵐp o:b əɾ ænt 'ɛɾðɑspɛɾfə/

5 - Että er Snjoren døskst af fík er skjome och er boge ve er fettinn enst ag ganstek.

/'ɛʰtaɪ̯ əɾ 'sɲoɾən døskst ɑv fik əɾ sco:mə ox əɾ 'bo:ɣə və əɾ 'fɛʰtɪn ɛ:nst ɑɣ gɑ:nstək/

6 - Och er Snjoren dícest: "Hjú fœrr öx edd fettare och hjú fál öx edd lenke. Vekkje en appen er komm bjontmínsinna fínnur. äggur, ný impur hjúk ed fássek ve hjú ferpœ ef.

/ox əɾ 'sɲoɾən 'di:t͡səst çu fœɾ̥ oʊ̯:ks ɛd 'fɛʰtɑɾə ox çu fa:l oʊ̯:ks ɛd 'lɛŋkə vɛʰcə ɛ:n 'ɑʰpə:n əɾ kom 'bʲo:ntmi:nsɪnɑ 'finʏɾ 'aɪ̯gʏɾ neɪ̯ 'ɪmpʏɾ çuk əd 'fasək və çu 'fɛɾpœ əv/

7 - Vinä-gorr døskek vach och kvurdek er lenke hjúr, eftirti hjú enne ý aldrýnns.

/'vɪ:naɪ̯goɾ̥ 'døskək vɑx ox 'kfʏɾdək ɛɾ 'lɛŋkə çuɾ 'ɛvtɪɾtɪ çu ɛnə eɪ̯ 'ɑldɾeɪ̯ns/

8 - Och er Snjoren dîpst hjúk ed vekkám luge ob er ænt ervasperfe, och hjú bjäst ed ganstek er skjome.

/ox əɾ 'sɲoɾən dĩᵐpst çuk əd 'vɛʰka:m 'lʏɣə o:b əɾ ænt 'ɛɾðɑspɛɾfə, ox çu bʲaɪ̯st əd gɑ:nstək əɾ sco:mə/

9 - Obens er skjom hrekt er klache Babbel, Kvürd, obbe há enst lag er Snjoren kvurdst er lenkhette er ænt hvösta, och ed lag dîpst hán fettenennik ob er ænt ervak.

/'o:bəns əɾ sco:m ɾ̥ɛkt əɾ 'klɑxə 'bɑbəl, kfʲuɾd, 'obə ha ɛ:nst lɑɣ əɾ 'sɲoɾən kfʏɾdst əɾ 'lɛŋkhəʰtə əɾ ænt 'xvoʊ̯stɑ, ox əd lɑɣ dĩᵐpst ha:n 'fɛʰtɛ:nənɪk o:b əɾ ænt 'ɛɾðɑk/

Hello, my conlang is called Golve /'go:lðə/. It's vocabulary is mostly based on Portuguese, which is my mother tongue. But the structure of the language is based on Icelandic, German and French. But it's mostly Icelandic, giving the fact that all words are stressed at the first syllable as an example.
Golve has 3 cases: Nominative, Accusative and Genitive. The accusative has the ending -e when the root ends with a consonant, and ending -k when the root ends in a vowel. The genitive has the ending -a when the root ends with a consonant, and ending -r when the root ends in a vowel.
the alphabet consists of 27 letters (a æ b c d e f g h i j k l m n o ø œ p r s t u v x y z) and 3 diacritics.
The diacritics:
Diaeresis (¨) which diphthongizes the vowels, except æ, ø, œ and y;
The acute accent (´) which changes a /ɑ/, i /ɪ/, u /ʏ/ and y /e/ into á /a/, í /i/, ú/u/ and ý /eɪ̯/;
And the circumflex (^) which goes over i /ɪ/ and u /ʏ/ nasalizing them into î /ĩ/ and û /ũ/, combining î and û with 'a, e, o' they make each, one different nasal sound, aî /æ̃/, aû /ɑ̃/, eî /ẽ/, eû /œ̃/, oî /ø̃/, oû /õ/.

*There are a lot of other things I would mention but it would take too long, so let's call it a day :D

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Re: The "Tower of Babel" in your conlang

Postby DanielParker » Wed 30 Dec 2015 11:27 pm

As many have said before, this thread is seldom used, but I'm going for it.

Mine is most definitely a work in progress, particularly since I have no name yet for the language. It is yet another Romance conlang (crime, I know). I tried to make it stand out a bit, but I'll explain more later. Here goes:

At-Toar ëd Babel

1. Agoar toat at-tear pallav is-söl linguaj ed usav as messëms prols.
2. Quan is oms mirravën del ôièn, truarun un plan in tear ëd Xinar el-lac stavlirënës.
3. Ed decerënës l’un âl alter: "Vniz, faxam dis lars ed cuxàmëls col föc.» As brics fyrun al-loas piers ed il bìdymin fyt il luor morter.
4. Ed is decerënës: "Vniz, custruinnus on cidat ed on toar d’uv is-sòmmet toc ic-cel, ed faxannos un nom affìëc non siam despessës âl faç ëd toat at-tear.
5. Mas is-Sêiòr xendit për ver ac-cidat ed at-toar ëc custruiën is fils dis oms.
6. Ed is-Sêiòr dist: “Ec! Ês us-söl pôl chin an tuots il mèsem linguaj, ed vellac Il prìncip ël-lur laùr; ed an cuixàt a custrüir chic; ed or nul non lës impeiràt ëd får tuot cëc is arrìan projtàt.
7. Xêdèm lor, ed coffôdèm il luor linguaj, pëc l’un non côprend il linguaj del alter!
8. Assìn is-Sêiòr lës despessôt al faç ëd toat at-tear ed is cissarun ad custruir ac-cidat.
9. Pëxoc cheast fyt nunnåt Babel, pëc lac is-Sêiòr cuffyz il linguaj ëd toat at-tear ed ël-lac lës dispess syvër toat al faç d'at-tear.

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Re: The "Tower of Babel" in your conlang

Postby DanielParker » Thu 28 Jan 2016 3:43 am

That was the old, rough version; here's the new one:

At-Toar ëd Bàbel

1. Agoar toat at-tear pallav is-söl linguaj ed uzav as mesëms prols.
2. Kuan is oms mirravën del ôien, ìs truarën un plan in tear ëx-Xinar el-lak stallirënës.
3. Ed decerënës l'un âl àlter: "Vnix, faxem dis lars ed kuxamëls kol fök.» As briks fyrën al-loars piers ed il bìmmin fyt il luor morter.
4. Ed ìs decerënës: "Vnix, kustruìnnus on cidet ed on toar d'uv is-sòmmet tuk ic-cel, ed faxènnos un nom affin ëk non siam despessës âl fac ëd toat at-tear.
5. Mas is-Sêior xendiot për ver ac-cidet ed at-toar ëk kustruiën is fils dis oms.
6. Ed is-Sêior dist: "Ek! Es us-söl pöl kin an tuots il mesëm linguaj, ed vellak il prìncip ël-luor laùr; ed an kuissat ad kustruir cik; ed or nul non ëls îpedaråt ëd får tuot cëk ìs årrìan projtat.
7. Lor, xêdem, ed coffôdem il luor linguaj, prëk l'un non côprend il linguaj del àlter!
8. Assin is-Sêior ëls despessot âl fac ëd toat at-tear ed ìs cissarën ad kustruir ac-cidet.
9. Pëxok keast fyt nunnåt Bàbel, prëk lak is-Sêior cuffyz il linguaj ëd toat at-tear ed ël-lak ëls despessot syvër toat al fac d'at-tear.

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